so here is a first try of a drawing. i'd like to know what you think before i ink or finnish the guy. do i get the.. pain.. across?
the lyrics that this goes with are:
"Go and hide and run away
Run away, run and find something better
Go and ride the sun away
Run away like it's simple
Like it's right...
Give me a day, Jamie
Bring back the lies
Hang them back on the wall
Maybe I'd see
How you could be
So certain that we
Had no chance at all
Jamie is over and where can I turn?
Covered with scars I did nothing to earn
Maybe there's somewhere a lesson to learn
But that wouldn't change the fact
That wouldn't speed the time
Once the foundation's cracked
And I'm
Still Hurting"
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Music: Jason Robert Brown
Lyrics: Jason Robert Brown
Book: Jason Robert Brown
I know you liked doing the face, but I think the rest of the body conveys the message just as well. legs turned inward, arms hanging at the sides; it gives a sort of a droopy feel. I can see a lot of lost confidence and cheer in her.
ReplyDeleteBut it does leave me wondering how the guy feels about it. She seems shattered, how about him?